Feedback on editing

Today in class Frankie was editing our video and i was doing our digipak research. Miss Brookes and Mr Amato watched the footage which we have edited so far and gave us some feedback.

Miss Brookes and Mr Amato:

• Pace is key, needs more quick cuts
• The difference between quality of shots is visible
• Some lip syncing is out of sync
• It need to show more shots of us alone, showing our personalities e.g. when we are in front of our coloured light wall pushing the guy away